考题分析
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
破 题
这道题是典型的年轻人和老年人之间的比较,话题是旅游类,很生活化,不难。需要注意的就是这是二选一题,所以一定在全篇的范围内,注意将双方都提到,不能只写自己这一边。
头脑风暴
可以结合自己的经验:
比如年轻人的角度,可以多想想自己旅游有什么收获?
老年人的角度,就可以多想想自己的爷爷奶奶、或者父母退休后旅游有什么好处?
带入自己的实际经历,例子也比较容易想到,分论点也就更有理有据了。
1. 年轻时去旅游更好
① 可以增长见识(学习)
② 可以提升自信心(成功)
③ 年轻时身体更好,可以探索更多地方。(健康)
④ 可以交到更多朋友 (情感)
⑤ 年轻人英语更好、网络工具使用好,更能方便旅游。(高效)
⑥ 年轻人心态更加开放,可以尝试更多。(高效)
2. 年老时去旅游更好
① 时间更多,能玩得更好。(高效)
② 钱也更多,能玩得更舒适。(高效)
③ 能够锻炼身体。(健康)
④ 能够放松心情,更加愉悦。(健康)
参考思路
立场:年轻时更好
1. First, young people can gain a sense of confidence when traveling around. It is because 当去到另一个国家的时候,他们肯定需要make a detailed itinerary for their journey beforehand, interact with strangers whoever they encounter along the way, or even figure out solutions to overcome some emergency challenges like being stolen or missing a train. In the end,这些解决问题的经历都将提升他们的自信心. I still remember my first vacation in Thailand with my friends just after high school graduation. At that time, I was responsible to …. (详细列举自己做了哪些,最终提高了自信心)
2. With more capabilities, youngsters can also explore more when they are traveling abroad. As is known to all, although English has been a global language for quite a while, not everyone in this world could speak it fluently, especially considering different age groups. However, to some extent, 当代年轻人大多数还是从幼儿时期就开始学习这门语言,使得他们在旅游过程中购物、询问景点、和当地人适当闲聊还是没有太大问题的。Take myself for example. …(结合自己真实经历写即可,记得回扣探索更多) By contrast,(二选一的题一定要记得写对立面!)老年人如六七十年代的父母那一辈,他们很少系统学习过英语,因而除了hello等简单打招呼,几乎不能用完整的句子和国外的人进行交流。所以他们通常都只能选择package tour(跟团游),因而几乎只能到景点拍照、听解说、吃团餐,而不能自己随意探索。
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