【托福】写作分析:政府应该把钱花在娱乐还是艺术上?

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2023.10.14 考题分析



教授:地方政府的钱应该支持艺术相关的项目or公园绿道等娱乐?

Kelly:娱乐,更多人会从中受益。

Andrew:艺术,人少所以更需要政府支持,不然就没了。


Doctor Achebe: Local governments have limited budgets to spend on enriching residents' lives. Supporting arts programs like concerts and museums offers cultural engagement, while funding recreational activities like hiking trails and parks promotes healthy lifestyles. As students who appreciate culture and wellness, let's discuss whether local funding should support arts programs or recreational activities more. Which do you think better serves the community and why?


Kelly: I think local governments should prioritize spending on outdoor trails and parks rather than arts programs like museums and concerts. More people would use and benefit from improved recreation spaces than arts venues. If fewer residents are interested in the arts, they won't attend museums or concerts even if the government funds them.


Andrew: I believe local governments should actually prioritize spending on arts programs like museums and concerts rather than recreation. Precisely because fewer residents are inherently interested in the arts, public funding is essential to sustain these cultural institutions for the minority who appreciate them. Without support, access to the arts will decline and society will lose these enriching, enduring outlets for creative expression.



破题

这次的写作考题重复2022.9.24的独立写作政府类原题,只是学术讨论多了两位同学的想法分享,但其实本质都是一模一样!大家可以参考下面的考题分析。


一、art museums and music performances

1. 需要的资金更多,所以更需要政府支持。

2. 长期来看可以对国民有艺术熏陶(更有教育意义),提升国民精神世界。

3. 如果没有政府支持,这些可能没人来做,导致这块的教育缺失。

4. 娱乐休闲设施就算私人提供,门票也不贵,人们负担得起。


二、recreational facilities

1. 这些娱乐休闲设施人人都可以参与使用;艺术类理解门槛高,很多人不理解,浪费了资源。

2. 这些免费的娱乐休闲设施可以鼓动人们运动,更健康。

3. 艺术类的耗费太高,政府可以鼓动富豪们投资回报社会,而不是用人们纳税的钱。

4. 艺术类就算政府投入,可能也没人去看,浪费钱。


三、中立,分情况

1. 发展中国家,支持建设recreational facilities更重要。

2. 发达国家,支持建设art museums and music performances更重要。


四、中立,equally important,两者都需要政府支持。

1. recreational facilities 帮助人们保持身体健康。

2. art museums and music performances 满足人们精神需求。



参考思路


立场:recreational activities



In my viewI totally support Kelly's perspective that investing more government funds into parks and outdoor trails is essential.(同意同学观点)This is particularly crucial in developing countries, where a larger proportion of the population may not have the financial means to afford memberships at well-equipped commercial fitness centersTherefore, allocating resources to free playgrounds and public parks is a meaningful investment that promotes a healthier lifestyle among citizens.(进一步解释)Looking at my own community in Chengdu, China, I am fortunate to have a nearby park that provides a range of fitness opportunitiesincluding green spaces, well-maintained basketball courts, and table-tennis tables. Additionally, its proximityjust a five-minute walk from my home, encourages me to visit the park multiple times a week. Each visit reveals a lively atmosphere, with grandparents bringing their grandchildren to bask in the sunshine, and college students and young professionals engaging in various sports activities after work to unwindIn summary, local officials should prioritize increased funding for recreational facilities, recognizing their significant role in the daily lives of ordinary citizens.(给出例子)


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