【托福】学术写作:拥有太多物质会降低生活质量?

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教授:你是否同意拥有太多物质会降低生活质量?

Claire:同意。过多衣服就会管理麻烦。

Paul:同意。过多科技产品让人担心。


Doctor Diaz: While owning lots of consumer products is believed to increase the quality of life, these products can also impose responsibilities on those who own them. For example, electronic devices, appliances, and vehicles require constant attention and regular maintenance. Possessions also need to be stored and organized, taking up time and space. For these reasons, some people argue that having many possessions can actually decrease the quality of life. Do you agree or disagree? Why?


Claire: I totally agree that an excess of possessions can drag down our quality of life. just think about the time we spend organizing closets or garages. l spend hours every month sorting and storing clothes in my closet. This clutter and the time it takes to manage it can become overwhelming and detract from enjoying life.


Paul: Just the thought of having to constantly worry about my gadgets, or even my car needing maintenance gives me anxiety. it's like adding extra homework to life. Life often requires owning many things, but personally, l hate having to take care of them all or worry about them getting damaged or lost.




破题

Agree

1. 占用太多时间去管理(Claire)

2. 容易担心物品丢失(Paul)

3. 开销会太多,增加经济压力

4. 提高快乐阈值,导致更难以感到快乐


Disagree

1. 更有安全感

2. 多体验,更快乐

3. 更知道自己真正想要什么,不会压抑自己

4. 满足不同欲望




思路范文


立场:Agree


I agree with Claire and Paul that owning too many possessions can lead to various troubles.(同意同学观点) In addition to the time stress and anxiety they mentioned, I believe excessive purchasing can also cause financial strain, which burdens almost everyone. (补充新论点)It's clear that the more one owns, the more money they must spend, and this money doesn't appear out of thin airit requires harder work, more energy, and less time for rest or spending with family and friends.(解释) Consider my friend Alex. She was obsessed with fancy and luxurious apparels, always trying her best to keep up with the latest trends. Also, whenever she had the chance, she would flip through Taobao (a popular ecommerce app in China) and make random purchases based on her mood and feelings. Although she indeed had many “fun” stuffs at home and closet, she complained that she could never ask for a day-off or resign from work as she has loads of debt to repay every month. From this perspective, I do believe irrational and excessive purchases may provide instant pleasure, but they always result in higher costs down the road.(例子展开+总结)










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