【托福】学术讨论写作新题:关于团队运动

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Professor: Let's discuss the role that being on a sports team plays in a child's development. Many argue that playing a team sport, basketball, football or baseball, is an important experience that all children can benefit from in different ways. Conversely, others feel that the focus on team sports for children does more harm than good. Wht do you think? Is participation in team sports important for a child's government? Why or why not?


Kelly: Of course, children should participate in team sports! Not everyone is a great student, for many children, team sports are a chance to excel and build their confidence. They can recognize the importance of working hard to accomplish a goal, and this can transfer to other aspects of their lives.


Claire: I don't think participating in team sports is always a good thing. One reason is the bad behavior of parents during their children's competitions. Too many parents get overly invested and want to win more than their children do. To that end, they will argue with sports officials and referees and set a bad example for their children.




解题思路



这道题目是一道新题,但是话题并不是很难,讲的是团队运动,要想破题,可以从“运动”和“团队”两个角度出发。


应该参加团队运动:‍‍‍‍

  • 学习提高团队合作

  • 学习提高交流技能

  • 强身健体

  • 交朋友

  • 锻炼毅力


不应该参加团队运动:‍

  • 影响学习(太花时间)

  • 价格昂贵(各种专业装备)

  • ‍影响社交(太花时间)




参考范文



From my perspective, it is more harmful than beneficial to participate in team sports regularly as team sports may negatively impact students’ studies. It is true that team sports can help children build up their confidence and teach them to work hard towards their goals. However, the time-consuming nature of team sports will prevent children from obtaining satisfactory grades. It is never easy to win games and in order to win, children may have to devote much of their spare time to training individually and in teams. They not only need to improve their own skills to play a better role in their positions, but also need to learn how to cooperate with others in a game. As there are usually many members in a team, like 5 in a basketball team, a smooth collaboration is not an easy matter and requires hours and hours, even weeks and weeks of training. In this way, students will have less time to spend on course assignments, reviews and preparations for exams and thus will obtain low grades. Therefore, participating regularly in team sports is harmful to children’s studies.










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