【托福】12.8学术讨论写作:学校资金应该怎么分配?

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2024.12.08 考题分析


简化大意:

教授:学校资金应该怎么分配?提升老师工资or买更多教学资料设备

Claire:给老师涨工资

Paul:投资到教学设备


详细考题回忆:


Doctor Achebe: Let's consider how schools allocate their funds for various resources, with a focus on the allocation between teacher salaries and other resources such as computers and books. What do you think is the best way for schools to prioritize their spending? Should more funds go towards increasing teacher salaries to attract and retain quality educators, or should they invest more in technology and learning materials like computers and books?


Claire: I think raising teachers' salaries is crucial because it can encourage people to view teaching as a viable profession rather than pursuing careers in other industries. Additionally, offering competitive wages can attract some of the brightest and most talented individuals to become teachers. When teachers are fairly compensated, it not only motivates them to excel in their roles but also enhances the overall quality of education.


Paul: Teacher salaries are already quite competitive, and it may be more prudent to allocate resources toward improving student equipment and providing up-to-date materials. Enhancing the learning environment with better technology and modern educational resources can greatly benefit students' education.




破题



如果考场遇到这道题,而对教师这个话题积累又不多的话,这道题也可以从题目中的另一个选项入手,即提升科技设备等,可以从日常自己学校的教学设备可能比较老旧入手,比如电脑太卡、软件更新不了、兼容太差、图书资源老旧等,这样细节展开也会比较好写的。




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立场:提高老师薪资


In my opinion, Claire is right when she says thatonly when talented teachers are recognized and paid fairly will they stay in the education sector longer. (同意同学观点)This is because when schools fail to prioritize teachers' financial rewards, experienced educators who have invested years in refining teaching materials, designing courses, and understanding adolescent psychology may be tempted to seek opportunities in better-paying schools or switch to related, more lucrative fields such as private tutoring. If this happens, schools' teaching reputation and students' academic performance would surely suffer.(给出支持理由)


Furthermore, Paul makes a valid point about  the importance of a conducive learning environment, including cutting-edge technology and advanced materials. (让步同学观点)However, he overlooks the fact that most educational equipment is subsidized by the government or donated by philanthropists and tech giants. Additionally, learning resources like books have become more affordable in the digital age. Knowledge is now readily accessible online, allowing both students and teachers to find the information they need with a simple Google or YouTube search.(给出反驳理由)


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